Sam Walters NEA

MAGAZINE LAYOUT I would add much more colour much stick to the house theme - so not multicoloured but a wider range such as cyan, etc. Change the layout of the text - change positions of different paragraphs and change text size - at the moment is very bland and in one place and much too small to make the reader fully engage with what he/she is reading.

CANNIBAL COPS FINE KILLER'S KIT Key Technique - Alliteration 'K' Sound MAGGIE DEAD IN BED AT RITZ Key Technique - Rhyming  Key Technique - Repetition IS THERE NO ONE LEFT IN BRITAIN WHO CAN MAKE A SANDWICH? Key Technique - Rhetorical Question IT'LL RAIN 'TILL SEPTEMBER Key Technique - Abbreviation DEAD! Key Technique - Monosyllabic + Exclamation Mark PURE TERROR IN HER EYES Key Technique - Emotive Language HARRY NAKED ROMP Key Technique - Colloquial Language Other techniques - rule of 3 (blood, sweat and tears), Mode of address/personal pronouns (Britons want YOU!) Front Cover - 'Seventeen' - Techniques - Mode of Address/Personal Pronoun - 'ALL YOU Issue!' - Rule of 3 - 'Fashion, Beauty & Body' Yellow puff with the words 'Over 700' in it is persuasive because it is designed to stand out through the bright colours in order to project the message to the reader - emphasis on such a large number - 700. More techniques - words like ...